You can use the following checklist to revise your essay:
1- Is there an explicit subject in each sentence?
2- Is there a verb in each sentence?
3- Do all verbs agree in number with their subjects?
is very pretty.)
4- Are all pronoun references correct?
(Gisela was very thoughtful,
he brought some
5- Is the word order correct?
(Subject + verb ... -word order in English is not as flexible as in Catalan or Spanish)
6- Is the proper verb tense used and formed correctly?
7- Check for correct possessive adjective
8- Check for correct form and position of adjectives.
9- Have you organised the information logically into different paragraphs?